Activity for B Altmannâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #24891 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #24458 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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A: How to make stock death speech great again? "...I'm so cold, p-please... I don't, I don't want to go.." is a stock phrase because anyone could say it, so everybody does. Instead, make it personal. Make the character say something that only they would say. Weave in something from their past. Maybe they are remembering how they almost froze to ... (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
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A: How to slow down the pace of the story? The answer to this question really depends on which scale you are talking about: do you want to slow down a paragraph? A scene? A chapter? The whole story? You talked about the story in general in one of your comments, so I'm going to focus on that. Here are a few ideas: Reflection If you're follo... (more) |
— | about 7 years ago |