Activity for Unhappymarshmellowâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #25332 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #24123 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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Should I make my character suspect an upcoming twist or not? I have reached a point in my story in which the characters, who are in a sort of gang, will have to turn against each other. The specifics of it are not important; what is, is that capturing the main character presents an opportunity for them to gain more power, and they gather to capture the MC and ... (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |
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Way to reveal big twist in fantasy world In my fantasy story, a new group of people come to this empire seemingly peacefully. But soon, they begin to blame these magical people for an assassination of the empire's empress, giving the crown to whoever captures and delivers the most people into the palace. This sends the protagonist, who is ... (more) |
— | about 7 years ago |