Activity for Mackenzie McClane‭

Type	On...	Excerpt	Status	Date
Edit	Post #24184	Initial revision	—	almost 5 years ago
Question	—	How to improve the flow of short scenes When I write I usually only want to tell the reader the important stuff, but that tends to be a small scene every couple of hours. Too much of the time, the scene is only a page or so. That leads to the story feeling jarring or disjointed, having to cut to a different location/conversation each time.... (more)	—	about 7 years ago