Activity for Soph
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #24248 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
How to avoid repetitive sentences? (Describing actions, he/she) I was just wondering if anybody had some tips on how to avoid repetitively describing characters' actions in the same way? Here is an example which I'm struggling to reform, mostly because I keep using 'he/she did this' etc as I'm sure you can tell: > “Oh, of course!” She urged, taking the snacks fr... (more) |
— | about 7 years ago |