Activity for HeavenlyHarmonyâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #39171 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #29442 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
Can overwriting be made to look intentional from a first-person narrative? I am an aspiring author, trying to get my 80,000-word traditionally published, though I will self-publish it if that doesn't work out.this article suggests that we avoid it altogether. I've used Microsoft Word's clarity and conciseness tool to refine words like have to to must. However, I noticed th... (more) |
— | about 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
How can one provide more clarity and still be concise? I am working on revising a petition because one of my friends said that it needs a lot of revision. For one, they said that it needed clarity, and for another, it needed to be concise. My question is, isn't there a way to balance out both at the same time? The way I see it, if you are too vague, it'... (more) |
— | over 6 years ago |