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Answer A: Is show not tell less useful advice in first person
This should be a comment Learn about the difference between telling and interiority.
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almost 7 years ago
Answer A: My readers are losing interest halfway through. What is a list of possible remedies?
Why do you ask us? We haven't read your story. Ask your readers. The whole point of beta readers is that you can ask them why they stopped reading or what made them stop. If they just tell you that they stopped their feedback is incomplete and useless. So contact your beta readers and ask them this...
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almost 7 years ago
Answer A: Should I use the real name or attempt to describe?
What do you want? 1. Do you want readers to think that they are in some kind of alternative fantasy ancient Egypt? Then call those clothes "haram" and "usekh". 2. Do you want readers to think that they are in a world completely unrelated to any historic period on Earth? Then But beware. If yo...
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almost 7 years ago