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| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #25773 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
How do I show dust/ ashes being blown away by the wind in a story? I don't want to straight up say that the dust/ ash was blown away, I want it to have a creepy vibe to it so it's more interesting. So is there any way to show (not tell) ashes being blown away by the wind besides "the ashes were blown away"? (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |