Activity for Simone Chelo‭

Type	On...	Excerpt	Status	Date
Edit	Post #28696	Initial revision	—	almost 5 years ago
Answer	—	A: Is it ok to reference something modern to give the reader a better idea of what something looks like if the book is set in the Middle Ages? I'd like to add a thing to all the already given answers. It's definitely not ok if this feature is used only once in the whole story, but if it is consistent instead... Chapter 3: The majestic sword. [...] Edward's sword was black and shiny, like a brand new car. [...] (I, as a reader, would thi... (more)	—	over 6 years ago