Activity for Simone Chelo
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Edit | Post #28696 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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A: Is it ok to reference something modern to give the reader a better idea of what something looks like if the book is set in the Middle Ages? I'd like to add a thing to all the already given answers. It's definitely not ok if this feature is used only once in the whole story, but if it is consistent instead... Chapter 3: The majestic sword. [...] Edward's sword was black and shiny, like a brand new car. [...] (I, as a reader, would thi... (more) |
— | over 6 years ago |