Activity for Elise Carverâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #28856 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
Is there such a thing as using too Many "I's" in a first person novel? For example, would you say this section of copy has too many "I's" or even "my's"? > I woke in a daze. A drug induced daze. > > I recognized it instantly, the feeling of being disconnected from my limbs. Only this was much heavier than the brain fog of the little blue and red pills I usually had in... (more) |
— | over 6 years ago |