Activity for Jonathon D.
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #29210 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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Mentioning quickly repeated events in first person? When writing in first person, is it better to mention as little repetition of events as possible? Or can it improve writing in some cases to have a character duplicate previous events and have them mentioned by the writer? For example, would it be better to have something like, > "I drew my hand ba... (more) |
— | over 6 years ago |