Activity for Ælis
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #30306 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #30138 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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A: Is it bad if I sidetrack to a backstory that’s not really necessary but is interesting? I think that you already know you have to cut it. I know you are emotionaly attached to it but, if it doesn't move the plot forward and if it doesn't help establish character,... well, as you said, it's useless. Adding text just for the sake of adding it is not a good idea. But before removing it, a... (more) |
— | about 6 years ago |
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A: Characterisation: What lines can an antihero cross while retaining reader sympathy? As long as you find your character sympathetic, I think you are fine. However, here are some basic advice to advice build a sympathetic character: - Make him suffer. We don't like to see someone in pain and thus, even if the character is a bad guy, we weel feel sorry for is suffering. - To continue... (more) |
— | about 6 years ago |