Activity for Snowmanâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Edit | Post #2351 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
| Question | — |
Can my paragraph use better adjectives and descriptions? I feel my punctuation is all over the place, and the adjectives are not as charming as I think they are. If anyone has watched the beginning of the first Lord of the Rings, where the hobbit is lying in that green meadow, and you think to yourself that that is where you want to be, that's kind of the ... (more) |
— | about 13 years ago |