Activity for Ruchit Dalwadiâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Edit | Post #31211 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Answer | — |
A: Is my story pacing too fast? Every writer strives to make readers to feel the universe depicted in the story or writing. MC going to her boss(action) - confront(emotion)- collapses(incident)- taken to the hospital(action) -boss waiting for her(action)- MC wakes up(action) - ride being offered by the boss(action) - car crash(inc... (more) |
— | about 6 years ago |