Activity for Shirayuki hugon
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #32184 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
Writing a crying scene Writing a crying scene makes me accidentally do repetitions like "the tears which were on her face broke down into a slithering stream..." and then putting the word tears again and again. What should I do to make sure I avoid that? How can I write an effective crying scene, without repeating the sa... (more) |
— | about 6 years ago |