Activity for Tropingenie
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #32235 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
Should I change my method of indicating internal monologue (parenthesis) to something more conventional? I am writing a fantasy novella that ends up using a lot of internal monologues, often mixed with dialogue, descriptions, and other character's monologues. For example, this excerpt from the first chapter > Yoshida’s head was aching from where he had been hit. A bright light shone in his eyes, and he... (more) |
— | about 6 years ago |