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| Edit | Post #33402 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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College Essay - Thesis and Topic - Hard to differentiate I have a hook. But my thesis seems to be more like a restated topic rather than a piece that encapsulates my topic with a claim. Any tips on how to fix this? I don't want a weak topic, but I also don't want to have my thesis as a restated topic. Maybe I am misunderstanding the difference between the ... (more) |
— | almost 6 years ago |