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| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #33844 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
| Question | — |
What are the best techniques to show a character panicking as it is seen by the POV character? So the problem I am having is that the protagonist of the novel I am writing is having a confrontation with another character, who starts panicking. Instead of saying "panic dripped from his face", I am trying to figure out a way to rewrite this so that it shows, not tells, the emotion. This is diffi... (more) |
— | about 5 years ago |