Activity for york
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #35070 | Initial revision | — | almost 7 years ago |
| Question | — |
Describing Pain in First Person Present Tense Just a scene I pictured- (Character receives a syringe in the chest but doesn't feel the after pain until a moment later) Ex: Johnny begins to feel a burning like sensation in his chest that's more painful than a gunshot. It forces him to fall down on the ground and hit his head, bear in mind Jo... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |