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| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #35147 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #35128 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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How to describe a fist bump explosion? I'm having trouble describing a fist bump explosion in my story. I can't just say "they did a fist bump explosion," because everyone may not know exactly what that looks like. Googling doesn't really help much. How would you describe a fist bump explosion in order to make it understood without going ... (more) |
— | over 5 years ago |
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How do I differentiate characters in first person POV when the narrator doesn't know them yet? Okay, so two women are in a bar and I'm telling the story from one of the women's POV. Two guys come in and the women are watching/listening to them from a distance. They don't know their names or anything about them. The two guys have the exact same height and build, so I can't say "the shorter guy... (more) |
— | over 5 years ago |