Activity for user3661841
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #36620 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
Should I write in a style that is more conducive to a situation I am describing or write it the way I normally write? I am writing a short story that describes a dream that I had as a child. I wrote a first rough draft and had my girlfriend read it to give me some feedback. One thing she criticized is my writing style, saying that I type too formally, which she said felt out of place for the events in the story. The... (more) |
— | over 5 years ago |