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| Edit | Post #37182 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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A: Should you avoid redundant information after dialogue? Why don't you paraphrase the action? Say what he is literally doing. How does he give the chip? Is it in an envelope? Does he extend his arm? Is he tossing it? .... > "Here's the chip in question" he said as he passed him the sealed envelope, making sure [Jack] had a firm grip on it before he let go... (more) |
— | over 5 years ago |