Activity for woxim
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #38629 | Initial revision | — | almost 7 years ago |
| Question | — |
Do we simplify descriptions when they sound weird? > The woman said as she pulled a small coin out of a small wallet ... The woman said as she pulled a small coin out of a small box she opened/used earlier. I am wondering if "opened" or "used" is perfectly fine here, because the action used is vague when it shouldn't be (she took her wallet out ... (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |