hszmv‭

Another problem with this system is how the brain reading English doesn't require spelling to be correct, especially if the word has 4 or more letters. Basically, it's entirely possible to read th...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So a couple things, but the big problem is in the United States, the age of consent is usually 16, not 18 (It's 18 in California, which where most of the world's porn is filmed. It's also the home...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

As mentioned, the nature of what a Warp Drive does is a scientific possibility and considered a possible near future tech with NASA working on a similar in principle Warp Drive (in Star Trek, the W...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Try looking for places where you're overly wordy. Your third sentence for example is clunky and seems to be trying to fit in words for the sake of getting close to the maximum. I'd re-arrange it...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

As someone with ADHD, I've always found that the best way to right action, especially in battles and combat, is fast. Use short sentances... this isn't the time you want to be descriptive because ...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I would recomend Yanks with Tanks and Brits with Battleships from TVTropes' UselfulNotes section (They also have a bunch of nations with weapons articles, all that detail the nations military set u...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I used to run a Star Trek RP game and when doing cliffhanger-esque sessions all the time. Normally I'd start off the next game with a short recap about who was where and when and why.... Since th...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I thought one of the best discussions in film on a topic like this occurred in Jurassic Park, the "Sexism in Survival Situations" scene. In this scene, John Hammond and Ellie Saddler (forgive spel...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Super Sentai (better known as Power Rangers in the West, though not the same show) recently had a season which started with 9 core members of the team, and ballooned to 12 by show's end (Rangers mi...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Going of the "Lay person" comment, there are a lot of topics today where people may understand the fundamental basics of the system, but not the actual working mechanics. I recall a scene from th...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I have characters like this, and a lot of teen characters at that. There are teens who will talk like this (Nerds who read. Socially Awkward kids. Motivational speeches trying to sound important...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Of the three best selling book series for boys of an elemenatry/middle school age, all three were written by authors who syled their name thus: [first name initial][second name initial] [full surn...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Almost every Animorphs book opens with the first person narrator explicitly saying that their only Personal Identifying Information they would give the reader was their first name and until the fin...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

The best way to pull this off is that both the magical answer and mundane answer are plausible because the answer of "is it magic or scientifically explainable* doesn't matter as the result would b...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

@CortAmmon hit the nail on the head and your answer partly confirms this. This is a story that is being told from a robot's perspective. To whom is the Robot telling the story too? English speak...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭