Activity for WannabeWriter‭

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Edit	Post #38957	Initial revision	—	almost 5 years ago
Question	—	Can I mix one character's dialogue with another's POV in the same paragraph? I'm struggling trying to write a scene (fiction novel). I want to know if it would be confusing to write it this way: > Paul shook his head, yanked away. “Sure it is, Mike. You left me there,” he looked out of the window, “with her.” > > He heard Mike sigh. “I’m sorry. Things between your mother an... (more)	—	about 5 years ago