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Posts by Lauren Ipsum‭

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Q&A How likely is the "five consecutive word rule" to detect "random," as opposed to intentional plagiarism?

If we're genuinely talking just five consecutive words: yes, that could happen by chance. But plagiarism is not just about five words in the middle of a 120-page thesis. It's lifting ideas, plots...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Quotes or no, for Hiccup

If you really feel the need to have whatever noise she makes expressed as dialogue, I would write it as "Hic!" However, I personally would either write it as Hic! to indicate it's more of a sound...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to write to accommodate subsequent automatic translation

You can't guarantee the reader will make sense of your translated text without a layer of human intervention. If anything, you should have two: one who is an expert in the field, to make sure cont...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Difference between an 'Abstract' and an 'Introduction' in a feature article?

An abstract is a quick summary or overview of the entire piece. It's used for search results (manual or computerized) — basically, the reader is saying, "Is this the piece I need as a source for X ...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Time measures in fantasy worlds

Mercedes Lackey's Valedmar series has established candles (of a specific although unexplained size) which burn steadily enough to be marked off and used for timekeeping. So "three marks" (that is, ...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A think, I think, I don't think

In some of them you can just drop the "I think." You can also use dialect, slang, or regionalisms. You can do it. In my opinion, you can do it. You really should take a break. Yo...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Placing similes at the beginning and at the end of a sentence

In either case, there's something missing — or maybe it's because the sentence is out of context. Just to say someone washed his hands like a surgeon is insufficient; you need more detail. "He scru...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Does writing in a certain mood change how a writer writes?

I am reminded of the anecdote about Dustin Hoffman torturing himself for Marathon Man because he was a "Method" actor, so he'd look as tortured as his character. Lawrence Olivier looked at him and ...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Visual methods of plot development?

You might try OmniGraffle, which is a flowchart generator for Mac. I've only seen it used once or twice so I can't speak to how well it works, but it might fit your bill.

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to tell if my story is finished, or needs more?

If you didn't create an outline — that is, if you didn't know beforehand how it was going to end — then you're suffering from impeded arborvision (you can't see the forest for the trees). 1) Put ...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Iambic pentameter: how do you use words with 'secondary stressed' syllables?

Cheat. Drop some letters/syllables. It's true, in po'try, it cannae be changed (Feels like "can" needs another unstressed after it, doesn't it?)

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Overuse of bullet points

Your co-writer is a pain in the tuchus. I am sorry you have to put up with this annoying quirk of writing. That being said, I found two references so far: The Oxford Dictionaries: Bullet poin...

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Q&A What is the correct word/term that needs to be before the names of the maker of the project?

"Submitted by" might be your best answer. It obfuscates who the originator was (the authors/creators of the original work) and what you and your collaborator did, but the truth is, you are submitti...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I start a business-presentation?

That's not a bad opening. I might change it to "Today we're going to talk about..." to make it more inclusive, but there's nothing wrong with being straightforward. Another version might be "Today ...

posted 12y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to include photos in my Scrivener book?

As a user of both programs, I would definitely say just put in a placeholder and let your designer import the images. Having them in the Scrivener text isn't going to help. You export them as Word ...

posted 12y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How can I convey dates (with ordering) for events happening under different dating systems, e.g. a Sci-Fi story spread over the galaxy?

I can think of a few ways: 1) Cheat. This was how Tolkien did it, so you'd be in good company. He just listed somewhere in the appendices that "Year 5798 by Gondor's calendar = 144 Shire Reckoning...

posted 12y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I cite well known historical works?

Why would citing "a well-known historical source" be any different from citing a not-particularly-well-known historical source? For the speech: you found the speech somewhere, right? Book, websit...

posted 12y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Proper use of the "historical present tense"

Try this: San Francisco is just coming to life. I can see all of downtown from my hotel room. Ten stories below, the traffic is backed up on Powell Street. ... etc. ... etc. Two weeks earl...

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Q&A Tracing dependencies and emergent plotholes during edits

I'd use a spreadsheet as a wireframe. If you don't have such notes already, you may have to examine your story a section at a time, and make notes about each part detailing what's going on with Pl...

posted 12y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A It is a sign of bad writing to have many scenes that are disconnected with the main plot?

Along with nodding vigorously at everything Neil said... You can have discontinuity in the beginning, but at some point it has to be apparent to the reader how these threads are connected. In GRR...

posted 12y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Should I close this quoted paragraph?

You have broken and punctuated it correctly. But if you're worried about the she continued, then change it up a little: "Well," Antimony began, taking a deep, thoughtful breath, and stepping ...

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Q&A How to tell a story with the least amount of writing?

Maybe you shouldn't be writing. Maybe you should be collaborating. Sketch the thing out and hire a partner, or a ghostwriter. Short stories. Fewer words, and less need to create a world. You onl...

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Q&A How to represent dependencies in outlines

After you write your first draft, you will see from actual use what terms are dependent on other terms. That will allow you to reorder your definitions and put the ones you need first in front. Yo...

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Q&A Is it okay to call the reader's target audience stupid?

I sympathize with the sentiment, but no, you can't use "black humor" and "shop talk" in a book like that. Such comments have to be kept in-house and preferably not written down. We all complain abo...

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Q&A How can I reconcile the exposition of the three act scheme vs. starting out with a bang?

What you might want to do is get the whole thing written as a three-act piece with exposition in the beginning. Set it aside for a month, and then come back and see if the opening is too slow. If i...

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