Should I make the gender of the narrator more obvious?
This is the opening of a short story I'm writing:
1996 was the year I became obsessed with animal suicide. I guess you can say it became my reason to live—the sun in my sky, the very air I breathed. I talked about it the all the time: at home, at college, at parties, even at family reunions. So I wasn't surprised when people decided to keep a distance from me. I didn't blame them, though. No one wants to picture a drowning cat while enjoying a meal.
This new found passion also interfered with my dating life. It turns out animal suicide isn't the best topic for a romantic dinner.
"Animal suicide?" The guy I was dating stared at me across the table as though I had brought him some bad news. "That's what your research is about?"
"Well, it's more like a side project," I explained. "It's so interesting! Now I'm reading about thirty cows that threw themselves mysteriously off of a cliff. No one knows the reason, not even the person who wrote the article. Strange, isn't? What kind of existential crisis could lead cows to do that?"
The guy never called again. Too bad. I was beginning to like him.
I though the gender of the narrator would become apparent after the dinner part. But someone told me he couldn't figure out.
Should I make the gender of the narrator more obvious? If so, how?
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I think the gender and sexual ambiguity only makes this story that much more compelling. I've written similarly vague characters in the past and consider it not only more difficult to hide a character's gender throughout the narrative but also a pretty big compliment. You can even use this technique to conduct your own mini-experiment of people's perceptions of differences between male and female voice--and potentially use that to strengthen your writing otherwise.
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I don't think you should make the gender more obvious unless it needs to be more obvious. By choosing a 1st person narration the character uncovers him/herself and the logic should flow from how you have conceived this character to express themselves.
Is gender really a duality anyway? Men and women express their gender in such a variety of ways that you could end up just creating an uninteresting and generic character if you start throwing in some token references.
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The reason you think it's obvious is that you assume that only a woman would be having a romantic dinner with a man. Your baseline assumption is that everyone is straight. There is absolutely nothing in the text which precludes the narrator from being a gay or bi man having a romantic dinner with another gay or bi man.
If you want to assert her gender, you could throw in a bit of third-person description, like:
So I wasn't surprised when people decided to keep a distance from "the lemming lady."
Or the narrator's date could use her name:
"That's what your research is about, Sonya?"
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