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Listing items in fiction

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What sort of criteria should I consider when listing items in fiction? For example:

He was wearing a knit cap, a flower-patterned shirt, and faded jeans.

I ordered the items from top to bottom. (That's what makes most sense to me.)

Or maybe I should order them in a way it sounds better?

He was wearing a knit cap, faded jeans, a flower-patterned shirt. (Placing the longest item in the end, makes it sound better I think.)

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