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What sort of criteria should I consider when listing items in fiction? For example: He was wearing a knit cap, a flower-patterned shirt, and faded jeans. I ordered the items from top to botto...
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System
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2019-12-08T03:29:24Z (almost 5 years ago)
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Alexandro Chen
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2019-12-08T03:29:24Z (almost 5 years ago)
What sort of criteria should I consider when listing items in fiction? For example: > He was wearing a knit cap, a flower-patterned shirt, and faded jeans. I ordered the items from top to bottom. (That's what makes most sense to me.) Or maybe I should order them in a way it sounds better? > He was wearing a knit cap, faded jeans, a flower-patterned shirt. (Placing the longest item in the end, makes it sound better I think.)
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System
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2014-04-24T06:33:40Z (over 10 years ago)
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