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Q&A Referring to sign language in conversations

I am writing a story in which one of the main characters is Deaf, and therefore communicates with other leads using sign language. Not being a native speaker of English, I am having trouble with co...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by visakh‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T03:34:38Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar visakh‭ · 2019-12-08T03:34:38Z (over 4 years ago)
I am writing a story in which one of the main characters is Deaf, and therefore communicates with other leads using sign language. Not being a native speaker of English, I am having trouble with coming up the appropriate way to remind the reader that the characters are communicating using sign language. Here are a few examples I have thought of:

    "How was your school today?" Anna signed to Emily. "What did you learn?"
    
    "I can draw a butterfly now." Emily signed back with enthusiasm.
    
    "We will go to the park tomorrow and chase a lot of butterflies." Anna signed Emily.

Is it correct to use `Anna signed to Emily`, `Emily signed back` and `Anna signed Emily`? Are there better ways to phrase this?

Also, once the plot is set and the readers made aware that these two characters always use sign language to communicate, I am thinking of dropping the reference to sign language, and maybe mention it once in a while to remind the reader.

I would like to hear what native speakers think about this approach. Any tips/suggestions are very much welcome.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2014-06-11T08:37:32Z (almost 10 years ago)
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