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I'm trying to write a story in which the sun has essentially gone out and visibility is constantly limited, and sometimes completely gone. Being a very visual person, I'm finding it hard to describ...
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System
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2019-12-08T03:38:38Z (over 4 years ago)
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A Blue Shoe
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2019-12-08T03:38:38Z (over 4 years ago)
I'm trying to write a story in which the sun has essentially gone out and visibility is constantly limited, and sometimes completely gone. Being a very visual person, I'm finding it hard to describe things in a way that keeps the reader's interest. The sole source of help I am drawing on so far is a sequence in _Rhapsody_ by Elizabeth Haydon where the main characters travel through the core of the planet, most of the time in complete darkness. I feel like it is very well written and interesting, but I think I could be helped by more examples of such sequences. Does anybody have some memorable or notable sections of such stories they could point me to?
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System
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2014-07-24T19:46:54Z (almost 10 years ago)
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