How do I show that two days have passed in a short story?
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So two days before my character is thinking about something and she is in her room. How do I show that two days later her friend is talking to her?
Here are my rough sentences:
She relaxed when she heard him walk away.
That was it, right?
And then two days or one day later I want to open with her friend talking to her:
“I heard it’s the best thing to do,” Julian said.
So do i say like "julian said two days later"? or "Julian said at lunch the next day"?
I don't know how to transition.
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