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So two days before my character is thinking about something and she is in her room. How do I show that two days later her friend is talking to her? Here are my rough sentences: She relaxed whe...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:50:46Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Elsa
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2019-12-08T03:50:46Z (almost 5 years ago)
So two days before my character is thinking about something and she is in her room. How do I show that two days later her friend is talking to her? Here are my rough sentences: > She relaxed when she heard him walk away. > That was it, right? And then two days or one day later I want to open with her friend talking to her: > “I heard it’s the best thing to do,” Julian said. So do i say like "julian said two days later"? or "Julian said at lunch the next day"? I don't know how to transition.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2014-10-31T05:14:44Z (about 10 years ago)
Original score: 6