Placing a "strong" verb before a "weak" verb
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I'm not very sure if "weak" and "strong" are the right adjectives. Here's an example:
Getting on my knees, I turned to the right.
Crouching on my knees, I turned to the right.
Does the "stronger" verb crouching diminish the strength of turned? Is the first example a better option?
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