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I'm not very sure if "weak" and "strong" are the right adjectives. Here's an example: Getting on my knees, I turned to the right. Crouching on my knees, I turned to the right. Does the "...
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2019-12-08T04:02:50Z (almost 5 years ago)
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2019-12-08T04:02:50Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm not very sure if "weak" and "strong" are the right adjectives. Here's an example: > **Getting** on my knees, I turned to the right. > > **Crouching** on my knees, I turned to the right. Does the "stronger" verb _crouching_ diminish the strength of _turned_? Is the first example a better option?
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2015-02-13T02:11:29Z (almost 10 years ago)
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