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Q&A Clear steps for developing a powerful inner conflict

This question is similar to this one. However, it is different based on what I am looking for. I know what inner conflict is, and I know why I need it. I have tons of examples, and I can usually ...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T04:08:02Z (about 5 years ago)
This question is similar to [this one](https://writers.stackexchange.com/questions/4138/how-do-i-round-out-a-powerful-character). However, it is different based on what I am looking for.

I know what inner conflict is, and I know why I need it. I have tons of examples, and I can usually generate perfectly fine inner conflicts (hereafter called ICs) for my characters. Until now.

For some reason, the ICs I've been generating lately seem weak. It might just be that I'm getting used to characters being pulled in two opposite directions; I don't know if that's normal for writers. Then again, it might be that I am genuinely developing weak ICs.

The difficult part is that I don't know how to describe it. I don't see anything wrong with the ICs I am developing. They seem just as potent at first glance as any other IC, even those in well known books. This might mean that the problem lies in my writing: maybe I don't know how to properly incorporate IC into the character in a powerful way.

Long story short, I can't identify the problem. And since I can't tell you what the problem is, I can't very well ask for an answer. So I've decided that I must be doing something _somewhere_ wrong.

**Question:**

On that note, can anyone give me a clear and concise method for developing strong inner conflict? Hopefully studying the methods will shed light on where I am going wrong.

Note: Despite the above, and the below comments, I'm still looking for a clear method for developing powerful inner conflict. If you know of one that works for you, please post it here.

**Edit:** I have marked what's reply as the answer; however, the reply by Chris Sunami also contains some great counter examples, and should be read as well.

**Further edit:** 2 years later, I finally realize the problem: while the inner conflicts I was creating were fine, I wasn't _showing_ them enough. If the plot doesn't show the inner conflict naturally in all its detail, you need a subplot. I wasn't working with subplots, thus my IC's came across as lacking.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2015-03-25T19:41:24Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 8