Communities

Writing
Writing
Codidact Meta
Codidact Meta
The Great Outdoors
The Great Outdoors
Photography & Video
Photography & Video
Scientific Speculation
Scientific Speculation
Cooking
Cooking
Electrical Engineering
Electrical Engineering
Judaism
Judaism
Languages & Linguistics
Languages & Linguistics
Software Development
Software Development
Mathematics
Mathematics
Christianity
Christianity
Code Golf
Code Golf
Music
Music
Physics
Physics
Linux Systems
Linux Systems
Power Users
Power Users
Tabletop RPGs
Tabletop RPGs
Community Proposals
Community Proposals
tag:snake search within a tag
answers:0 unanswered questions
user:xxxx search by author id
score:0.5 posts with 0.5+ score
"snake oil" exact phrase
votes:4 posts with 4+ votes
created:<1w created < 1 week ago
post_type:xxxx type of post
Search help
Notifications
Mark all as read See all your notifications »
Q&A

Post History

50%
+0 −0
Q&A "Empty-space" vs "three-dot" scene break

What's the difference between the two? I've seen both in the same book. For example in the Bone Clocks by David Mitchell: Space breaks: He’s clever, I realize. First he makes you grateful. Rig...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T04:14:48Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/17155
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar Alexandro Chen‭ · 2019-12-08T04:14:48Z (almost 5 years ago)
What's the difference between the two? I've seen both in the same book. For example in [the Bone Clocks](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Bone_Clocks) by David Mitchell:

**Space breaks:**

> He’s clever, I realize. First he makes you grateful. Right. Of course. I do believe it’s time I was off.
> 
> DANDELIONS AND THISTLES grow along the cracked track and the hedges are taller than me.
> 
> * * *
> 
> And look what a fool she made of me, when my turn came to be Amanda Kidd–ed. Doesn’t Stella need friends? Or for Stella, are friends just a way to get what you want?
> 
> ON MY LEFT’S a steep embankment, with a dual carriageway running along the top, and on my right a field’s been cleared for a massive housing estate by the look of it.

**Three-dot breaks:**

> “What’s that s’posed to bloody mean?” Brubeck lets it drop. So I let it drop too.
> 
> • • •
> 
> THE CHURCH IS quiet as the grave. Brubeck’s asleep in a nest of dusty cushions.
> 
> * * *
> 
> “Not calling me ‘sweetheart’ would be a good start.” I don’t hide my laugh. The guy stares daggers at me.
> 
> • • •
> 
> LESS THAN A hundred yards later this knackered Ford Escort van pulls over. It might’ve been orange once, or perhaps that’s just rust.

Is the `• • •` a bigger scene break than then spaced one? When to use the former and when to use the later?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2015-05-11T15:22:56Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 5