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I have a scene in my story where the main character (the story is told from his POV) opens a door and there is a monster in the room. I want a sudden introduction, to show how shocked the characte...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T04:23:09Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Ryan Krage
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2019-12-08T04:23:09Z (over 4 years ago)
I have a scene in my story where the main character (the story is told from his POV) opens a door and there is a monster in the room. I want a sudden introduction, to show how shocked the character is, but I also want to give a description of the monster, or at least give an idea of what it looks like. How can I achieve both in the same paragraph? The character was not expecting the monster, because monsters should not exist in his world.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-06-24T17:02:06Z (almost 9 years ago)
Original score: 3