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The first time the character sees the monster, he's only going to get a few basic details. Christ, that thing is huge! It's green! and the teeth! After he's ducked out of the way and looked back o...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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System
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2019-12-13T12:00:29Z (about 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T04:23:11Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/17876 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
The first time the character sees the monster, he's only going to get a few basic details. _Christ, that thing is huge! It's green! and the teeth!_ After he's ducked out of the way and looked back over his shoulder, then he's going to notice the matted fur, the slitted yellow eyes, the cracked horns, the sulphurous breath, et cetera. So you describe it through the POV of the character and his terror.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-06-24T21:07:18Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 5