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Okay. In the story there's a flashback where one of the main protagonists loses his best friend in a battle where he was the only survivor. His best friend is a important character and, because of ...
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System
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2019-12-08T04:54:57Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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DarkYagami
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2019-12-08T04:54:57Z (over 4 years ago)
Okay. In the story there's a flashback where one of the main protagonists loses his best friend in a battle where he was the only survivor. His best friend is a important character and, because of that, I want him to go out a bit dramatically. But I fear that the scene will become overdramatic, especially when the protagonist has to promise that he'll live to his dying friend. **What are some mistakes I can avoid when writing such a scene?**
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-01-05T19:29:41Z (over 8 years ago)
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