DarkYagami‭

So. This is one of my first projects, so I have to ask this. The story takes place in a dystopian future, where a young man and a young woman meet each other. They then try to overthrow the tyranni...

5 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

The villain so far has only appeared in two chapters. However now he's making a return in a chapter which is mostly about him, his actions and his past. Now. What are mistakes I should avoid when w...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

My protagonist is an anti-hero. He's manipulative, cunning, kills, and sacrifices others for the greater good, which is to destroy an oppressive regime. I'm at the point where he has destroyed the...

3 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

The villain was, like the protagonist, a child soldier/mercenary, who served with him. The villain was captured, tortured, and snapped. He feels a burning hatred for the protagonist, believing that...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

The protagonist of my new story is a young cyberterrorist, who mainly attacks corrupt governments and uses his hacking skills to harm corrupt leaders and high nobles in his country. How do I write...

0 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So let's say the story is about a ''anti-hero'' who uses harsh methods to kill/expose corrupt politicians and banksters. Now let's say that I'd want to write a romantic subplot happening between hi...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Let's say I'm writing a story that isn't a fantasy story, it's more of a realistic thriller. However, I want to include a character who has psychic powers like telepathy and psychokinesis. Is it ...

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, the character is an anti hero, he loses all his morals, and becomes the very thing he fights against. How can I make the downfall of this character more emotionally moving/impactful without m...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I've finally decided to give a protagonist a happy ending, but what is there to avoid? What makes a happy end too cheesy? For example, if the story is about a anti-hero, who destroys his enemies, w...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Okay. In the story there's a flashback where one of the main protagonists loses his best friend in a battle where he was the only survivor. His best friend is a important character and, because of ...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

If, for example, I plan for a character to die in the middle of the story, and let's say I'd like to foreshadow his death by dropping a few hints here and there, what should I avoid when dropping h...

3 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I'm just interested. Since there were many plot twist in books, movies, etc some critics say they're unbelievable. Now I'm asking myself, what makes a plot twist believable/unbelievable?

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Let's say the character has over the years grown to dislike humans because he had many negative experiences with them, and is disappointed in humanity itself. How does one write such a character wi...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

If let's say one wants to portray a villain in a novel that suffers from insanity/psychosis as he has literally lost his grip on reality and is kind of living in his own world, what are the things ...

4 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭