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Q&A How to write a scene where the villain meets the protagonist?

The villain was, like the protagonist, a child soldier/mercenary, who served with him. The villain was captured, tortured, and snapped. He feels a burning hatred for the protagonist, believing that...

2 answers  ·  posted 9y ago by DarkYagami‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T05:01:07Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/20814
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar DarkYagami‭ · 2019-12-08T05:01:07Z (almost 5 years ago)
The villain was, like the protagonist, a child soldier/mercenary, who served with him. The villain was captured, tortured, and snapped. He feels a burning hatred for the protagonist, believing that he left him behind. The protagonist however feels heavy guilt, blaming himself for not saving him.

Now. They meet each other, when the protagonist infiltrates a building and is then faced by the villain. Now, I don't know how to write that scene, though. Like what should I avoid? What clichés should I avoid for example?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2016-02-04T21:13:55Z (almost 9 years ago)
Original score: 2