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The villain was, like the protagonist, a child soldier/mercenary, who served with him. The villain was captured, tortured, and snapped. He feels a burning hatred for the protagonist, believing that...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T05:01:07Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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DarkYagami
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2019-12-08T05:01:07Z (over 4 years ago)
The villain was, like the protagonist, a child soldier/mercenary, who served with him. The villain was captured, tortured, and snapped. He feels a burning hatred for the protagonist, believing that he left him behind. The protagonist however feels heavy guilt, blaming himself for not saving him. Now. They meet each other, when the protagonist infiltrates a building and is then faced by the villain. Now, I don't know how to write that scene, though. Like what should I avoid? What clichés should I avoid for example?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-02-04T21:13:55Z (about 8 years ago)
Original score: 2