How to keep a main character nameless?
I'm currently writing a story about a girl who was found by a couple in a magical isolated town, where everyone is named by the leader. I want her to not have a name because of two reasons:
- She doesn't belong in this town so the leader cannot give her a name
- Names have special power that the leader can use so by not being able to name her, he has no control over her (I'm hoping to work this angle later on in the story).
I'm finding that I'm struggling to try to keep a name out of it and I'm just wondering if there are any tips anyone has to keep a nameless main character OR if there is a different angle I can approach that still keeps the idea that "names have power"?
What are children called BEFORE the leader names them? This is what your character will continue to be addressed as.
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There are two ways you can accomplish not giving a name to your character. 1. Since there is a reason why she isn't giv …
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If everyone in the town is named by the leader, and a couple adopts her, then most people are going to refer to her as " …
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You could always have her decide on a secret name for herself, perhaps one that she wishes she had but never reveals to …
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All the way back to A Wizard of Earthsea, the Names-Have-Power trope usually handles this by giving people nicknames for …
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There are two ways you can accomplish not giving a name to your character.
Since there is a reason why she isn't given a name, you can simply explain that reason to the reader (e.g. by having the characters talk about it) and have the community handle the problem of a person not having a name in whatever way you think fitting (e.g. by using a nickname [which I wouldn't do, because a nickname is still a name in the magical sense], refering to her by function ["Mr. President", "Doctor", "baker" – think how many family names happened] or status ["unnamed one", "foreigner", "girl", "daughter", etc.]).
If you want the reader to remain unaware that the character has no name or don't want the reader wondering about why the character has no name (because you want the reason hidden), then simply tell the story from the first person perspective (people don't think of themselves by name, but by pronoun, so you don't have to give a name in narration) and paraphrase problematic parts of dialog (so whenever you feel that avoiding the name makes your writing awkward, you just do something like: 'The lord called for me to step forward.' or 'The lord pointed at me and waved for me to step forward.' instead of 'The lord shouted: "Step forward, Sarah!").
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You could always have her decide on a secret name for herself, perhaps one that she wishes she had but never reveals to anyone?
That way, if the story is from her perspective, you could get away with referring to her as such (with constant reminders that it's not her "proper" name).
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What are children called BEFORE the leader names them? This is what your character will continue to be addressed as.
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If everyone in the town is named by the leader, and a couple adopts her, then most people are going to refer to her as "the Kents' girl." To her face they might cal her "Miss Kent" or "Kent Girl," depending on their level of courtesy.
She can earn a use-name later depending on what she does, what she looks like, or how she behaves, like Carpenter, Red, or Stubborn.
I should also note that the first-person narrator of Rebecca, the second Mrs. de Winter, is never given a name. When we studied the book in high school our teacher said she made every class come up with a name for her just so we could talk about her. (Our class chose "Mandy" from Manderley, the name of the house.)
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All the way back to A Wizard of Earthsea, the Names-Have-Power trope usually handles this by giving people nicknames for "public" use. Their real names are closely-guarded secrets.
You can definitely give your protagonist a nickname; that's what people would do in the situation, because you have to call her something, and that also solves your problem.
If you want to emphasize her namelessness, you can put focus on how these monikers are nicknames, not her real name. One idea would be for different people to use different names; none of the nicknames "catch on" and become a widely-accepted name for her. You could even have her give a nickname to herself, if you need a name she gives herself from her own POV.
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