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Q&A How to write from a rich "bad boy's" perspective?

I am currently writing a story that alternates perspectives between the hero and heroine every other chapter. I have gotten a lot of work done with the heroine's chapters, but I have been trouble w...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by T. Afrin‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T06:03:15Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar T. Afrin‭ · 2019-12-08T06:03:15Z (almost 5 years ago)
I am currently writing a story that alternates perspectives between the hero and heroine every other chapter. I have gotten a lot of work done with the heroine's chapters, but I have been trouble writing for the hero's perspective. The hero is a young, wealthy business owner who has had his fair share of women and comes off as arrogant and over confident, but is actually a good guy.

It's been hard for me to look inside the mind of a player. I don't want to make him seem like an antagonist but I still want to keep his cockiness there as I'm writing his thoughts.

What are some ways to convey his personality through his thoughts?

Thank you!

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2017-02-04T02:37:35Z (almost 8 years ago)
Original score: 3