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I am currently writing a story that alternates perspectives between the hero and heroine every other chapter. I have gotten a lot of work done with the heroine's chapters, but I have been trouble w...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T06:03:15Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/26494 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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T. Afrin
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2019-12-08T06:03:15Z (about 5 years ago)
I am currently writing a story that alternates perspectives between the hero and heroine every other chapter. I have gotten a lot of work done with the heroine's chapters, but I have been trouble writing for the hero's perspective. The hero is a young, wealthy business owner who has had his fair share of women and comes off as arrogant and over confident, but is actually a good guy. It's been hard for me to look inside the mind of a player. I don't want to make him seem like an antagonist but I still want to keep his cockiness there as I'm writing his thoughts. What are some ways to convey his personality through his thoughts? Thank you!
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-02-04T02:37:35Z (almost 8 years ago)
Original score: 3