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Notes: My audience knows that adrenaline and epinephrine are synonyms. I'm new! I'm sorry if I abuse the site by posting this! Please critique ruthlessly. I would send by Facebook message to a...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T01:15:57Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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user1372
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2019-12-08T01:15:57Z (over 4 years ago)
## Notes: 1. My audience knows that adrenaline and epinephrine are synonyms. 2. I'm new! I'm sorry if I abuse the site by posting this! 3. Please critique ruthlessly. 4. I would send by Facebook message to a girl I know, who's having a bad year. ## Draft: Excerpt from The Mechanic In the roles of cooperating hitmen, Ben Foster and Jason Statham plan an assassination attempt. They finish each other’s sentences, amplifying a sense of magnitude, gravity, and confidence. - [Ben Foster] Adrenaline shot to the heart. 12cc and he’s dead in under three minutes. - [Jason Statham] Adrenaline’s unreliable. It may only force him into cardiac arrest. - [B Foster] But when the EMTs arrive, the first thing they do is jam you with a shot of epinephrine... - [J Statham] Which is toxic when combined with... - [B Foster] Adrenaline. - [J Statham] So on the off chance our adrenaline shot doesn’t kill him... - [B Foster] The EMTs will.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2011-02-22T00:02:17Z (about 13 years ago)
Original score: 5