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Do not use it! Do not use "we hear", either. See: http://reelauthors.com/screenplay-coverage/do-not-use-we-see.php Don't give camera directions (focused on...) Sounds are just in CAPS. If you wan...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-19T22:13:08Z (over 4 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T07:00:41Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/30239 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
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Do not use it! Do not use "we hear", either. See: [http://reelauthors.com/screenplay-coverage/do-not-use-we-see.php](http://reelauthors.com/screenplay-coverage/do-not-use-we-see.php) Don't give camera directions (focused on...) Sounds are just in CAPS. If you want the above sequence, use CUTS. > CLOSE ON BATHSHEBA's distraught face in the rain. A CAR DOOR OPENS. > > CUT TO: > > BISHOP CARINGLESS standing at the window she left [insert visual description here, eg 'stone faced' or 'angry' or 'haughty'] > > O.S. BATHSHEBA SCREAMS and is SILENCED. Sounds of STRUGGLE. BISHOP CARINGLESS turns calmly and leaves the window. > > CUT TO: > > TWO MEN carry the unconscious BATHSHEBA to their car. (edit: I fixed formatting a bit... char names in caps, etc)
#1: Imported from external source
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2017-09-15T22:09:24Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 1