I want to use something like V.O. or O.S to indicate my character is in a shadow, what should I do?
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I want to use something like V.O. or O.S to indicate my character is in a shadow, what should I do?
I like what the Wachowskis did in the Matrix, which is a major influence for me.
Would readers throw it in the trash bin automatically if I did the following? (I know the below formatting is awful, but I'm only concerned about the bold portions).
Bruce (Left Shadow)
...dialog here ...
Vince (Right Shadow)
...dialog here ...
(and later in the script after they come out of the shadows)
Bruce
...dialog here ...
Vince
...dialog here ...
Thanks! John
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