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So, I was writing a test story to see if my tools can work together in the way intended. Few paragraphs into the first chapter and there is a problem: Character A is a scaredy-cat, and I based the...
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System
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2019-12-08T07:32:37Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Mephistopheles
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2019-12-08T07:32:37Z (almost 5 years ago)
So, I was writing a test story to see if my tools can work together in the way intended. Few paragraphs into the first chapter and there is a problem:
Character A is a scaredy-cat, and I based the locations off of Slender: The Arrival's prologue chapter. So A decides not to use any light sources and goes through the prologue section moving from cover to cover, peeking out and moving.
This is understandable, F.E.A.R fans know why. _("Careful with your flashlight, it will give you away.")_
Though this is highly repetitive, which is a reason why readers drop a book.
**So, how can I write a section of repeated actions, without the writing being too repetitive?**
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2017-12-19T15:29:24Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 3