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I’m writing a paper and I have these sentences that are a bit problematic. I feel they generalize a bit and could be rewritten in less words. I’m kindly seeking suggestions on how to improve the be...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:40:38Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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John
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2019-12-08T07:40:38Z (almost 5 years ago)
I’m writing a paper and I have these sentences that are a bit problematic. I feel they generalize a bit and could be rewritten in less words. I’m kindly seeking suggestions on how to improve the below sentences. > The biggest mistake that women can make in their lives is to have a baby with the wrong guy. That's why it's important to take your time in the selection process. Some guys take longer than others to get it, but once they have it, they will end up making more money than the rest of them.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-01-11T12:39:58Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 4