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I have the following sentence: Pocket squares are a standout amongst the most vital apparatuses for a man of style. It's important to have the correct pocket square for the correct event. ...
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System
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2019-12-08T07:44:17Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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John
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2019-12-08T07:44:17Z (about 5 years ago)
I have the following sentence: > Pocket squares are a standout amongst the most vital apparatuses for a man of style. It's important to have the correct pocket square for the correct event. I feel the first sentence is a bit too advanced for the average reader. I am trying to see how to scale it down so that a 13-year-old boy could comprehend the sentence.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-01-18T19:09:48Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 3