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I have recently written an action scene, and I am not satisfied with it. It sounded choppy and inconsistent, and I'd love to know how to write it so it makes sense, doesn't sound like a robotic des...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T07:49:30Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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A curious writer
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2019-12-08T07:49:30Z (about 5 years ago)
I have recently written an action scene, and I am not satisfied with it. It sounded choppy and inconsistent, and I'd love to know how to write it so it makes sense, doesn't sound like a robotic description, and it keeps things going at a pretty quick pace. If you have any advice, please keep in mind that most action scenes I plan on writing about include hand-to-hand combat, swords, daggers, etc. (No pistols or guns.)
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-01-31T21:02:57Z (almost 7 years ago)
Original score: 7